new song...again (sorry :( )

ok, ok, i know you dont wanna read other peoples lyrics....but these are MINE!
all mine!
and i need help perfecting them!
so here it is
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I’ve been waiting for so long
Hoping that you would see
And I’ve been holding on this hope
That you could help me be free

BRIDGE
But still I'm freezing
While I see
You so carefree
Cause you found
the sun inside
And I'm here waiting
Pushed aside

CHORUS
You found the spring
But I'm stuck in winter
Waiting for the sun
To melt my soul
And deep in your heart
I know you can save me
Please come around
Show me

I can’t stand sitting
For so long
Watching the sunset
clear
I want the sunshine
That comes with spring
To brighten my views
Of the world

BRIDGE
CHORUS

Walk away
Give in
Ignore the sun in my dreams
Let the snow fall
Deep within me
While your heart will stay in the
Spring.


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oh by the way, i wrote this in response to DLD's last post....I'm not incredibly sure how it relates...but it does...somehow!
hehe
well thanku! hope you enjoyed my random song!...kinda

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~~ Poetic Pixie